Style: Ottava Rime
Jambian
a and c = 11 syllables, b = 10 syllables
a b a b a b c c
Theme: time and memories
Thursday, October 18, 2007
Sunday, October 14, 2007
Bojan's entry; round one:
Into the forest depths where nature plays
With adolescent boys in magic streams
Whereof my every wish and all my dreams
With angeldust of purity portrays.
To be, myself, a part of nature's flame
That howling wolves with eyes fixed on the moon
And brightest stars all over nightsky strewn
With lack of human modesty exclaim.
I to the angel nymphs my sorrow cry:
Please! Comfort me with everlasting heat
And kiss my tears away before they freeze.
And to the heaven deep a painful sigh:
No loving voice, but silence or repeat;
Please! My life seems but an unrelentless breeze.
With adolescent boys in magic streams
Whereof my every wish and all my dreams
With angeldust of purity portrays.
To be, myself, a part of nature's flame
That howling wolves with eyes fixed on the moon
And brightest stars all over nightsky strewn
With lack of human modesty exclaim.
I to the angel nymphs my sorrow cry:
Please! Comfort me with everlasting heat
And kiss my tears away before they freeze.
And to the heaven deep a painful sigh:
No loving voice, but silence or repeat;
Please! My life seems but an unrelentless breeze.
Thursday, October 11, 2007
Daniel's entry; round one:
I met a man with whom I fell in love
This made my parrents whish that I would die
For he, he was a man, and so was I
They never hid their loath and hate thereof
Then one day I got ill, and lost the fight.
"It's God who've punished you" my mother told.
So left, did I, this life I once controlled;
I closed my eyes and stepped into the light.
This must be heaven and I must be dead.
See, people here are happy! All is well -
forgiven for whatever we had done.
Then one man turned towards me, grinned, and said:
"Freedom you'll find here, for this is hell,
and heaven's filled with tyrants - here are none."
This made my parrents whish that I would die
For he, he was a man, and so was I
They never hid their loath and hate thereof
Then one day I got ill, and lost the fight.
"It's God who've punished you" my mother told.
So left, did I, this life I once controlled;
I closed my eyes and stepped into the light.
This must be heaven and I must be dead.
See, people here are happy! All is well -
forgiven for whatever we had done.
Then one man turned towards me, grinned, and said:
"Freedom you'll find here, for this is hell,
and heaven's filled with tyrants - here are none."
Monday, October 8, 2007
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